Dear Africa Educational Trust
I am an international student from Japan at Eckerd College, Florida. I have been researching about a poor education in Africa and I just found your website. I am really impressed that you have been supporting many young people in this last 50 years, and I believe those who are not able to obtain an education need your organization.
It amazed me that 750,000 people have been supported by your organization since 1958. I had been to other websites that have helped same issues but I have never encountered the organizations like yours, long-term and very effective supporting.
The lack of good quality education is still a big problem in Africa and I urge you to continue what you have been doing because the things you have done must have had broad implications for future Africa. It will make much difference whether you leave or stay with them. So please, keep supporting them.
Lastly, I have a question for you: what encourages you to keep supporting them for a long time?
I am looking forward to your response.
Sincerely,
Hisa
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Dear UNESCO
I am an international student from Japan at Eckerd College, Florida. I have been doing some research about the environment of poor African countries, and since I was curious about what you have been doing for the people who are in those countries, I visited your website that I found to be very inspired with one of your projects.
The project, “UNESCO Project to Fight Human Trafficking in Africa”, must be playing very important role to make African societies better. One of the reasons why the poor educational system still exists is that the trafficking prevents many children not to go to school. It is true that there are only few laws to prohibit the human trafficking and as a result, children are sent away by parents to strangers to earn money to support their own families. I do not think that is children’s job. Children are supposed to go to school because they are the people who are going to make our future communities. So I am so glad that your project has been fighting against Human Trafficking.
I believe it will make much difference whether you leave or stay with them, I urge you to encourage the government to create a new law to prohibit Human Trafficking. So please, continue to fight against the trafficking.
Although, I have a question for you: It seems like you have not uploaded the news since September in 2007. Why don’t you let us know the latest news?
I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Hisa
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Dear CNN
I am an international student from Japan at Eckerd College, Florida. I have been researching about a poor education in Africa, and I used your website many times to know the issues African countries have suffered from.
I am very impressed by your hard working to let everyone all around the world know matters that a lot of poor African countries have been facing. The news you provide is always latest and I cannot imagine how quick it will be to let us know those latest news every day.
However, I believe there are many things we still do not know about poor African countries and raising a public awareness is the first step to make African societies better. Since the internet is the most powerful material to spread worldwide news, I really would like you to keep making effort to have us know the latest news so that we can be well informed.
Lastly, I have a question for you: As a news reporter, do you think is there any effective way to let my friends know the issues I want to tell?
Sincerely,
Hisa
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Hisa,
Excellent work on your drafts. I see that you have carefully used the structure and the rhetorical modes.
I really like that you ask for the website to be updated. This is an activity that is "do-able."
I also think that you have a lot of good research presented which shows your readers that you "know" what you are writing about.
Nice work,
Take care,
Kat
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